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A Perfect Juxtaposition by *Kezzi-Rose:iconKezzi-Rose:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Open


                                              A Perfect Juxtaposition

I thoroughly hate loving you.

      Your heart is a perfectly-carved stone;
      Set deep into your chest, soft as granite.

      I grip you gently with angels’ claws;
      Icy breath scorching your warm, shivering skin.

      Your hard topaz eyes shimmer liquidly;
      Evaporating my soul with their numbing heat.

Together we fall upwards, drowning in the very air that whistles past our entwined, separate bodies.

      Your moist lips deliver a dry kiss upon mine;
      I can live neither with nor without you, my sweet oxymoron.

You and I;
      A perfect juxtaposition.
©2008-2009 *Kezzi-Rose
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Author's Comments

:damphyr: Juxtaposition ~ noun
[1.] An act or instance of placing close together or side by side opposing objects or ideas, esp. for comparison or contrast.
[2.] The state of being close together or side by side.

Lol emo poetry. c:

Between college assignments, I found some time to write a little literature. ^w^ And here's how my stream of thoughts came out on paper [minus all the scribblings and crossings-out]! c:

The layout is a bit iffy because the format came out a bit...asymmetrical. xD Lots of varying sentence structures...hope you like it, anyway!

Comments and faves very welcome ♥

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=Nytram12 Sep 27, 2008, 5:00:15 AM
i likes it alot =p. i can totally relate to the piece of paper with lots of scribblings on it lol

i love the idea that angels have claws, its just not something you would associate with angels

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Life is just living in confusion. Its what you make of that confusion that matters

Want to get more feedback on your prose or poetry? ---> *Writers-Club
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=saturninesweetness Sep 27, 2008, 5:13:32 AM
Gah!
Oh so clever, and flawlessly imperfect. :XD:


:+fav:


- Carolyn

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~ In saturnine, sweetness, Horatio Fin
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*Kezzi-Rose Sep 27, 2008, 5:22:28 AM
Thank youu! c:
Lawl yes. Scribbling is good 8D

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☆ { ĸ e z z ı } THE TOXiC KiTTY™
Dinosaurs aren't e x t i n c t ; they're just shy♥
:iconkezzi-rose:
*Kezzi-Rose Sep 27, 2008, 5:23:03 AM
Hehe, thank youu! c:

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☆ { ĸ e z z ı } THE TOXiC KiTTY™
Dinosaurs aren't e x t i n c t ; they're just shy♥
:icongender-unknown:
~Gender-Unknown Sep 27, 2008, 5:35:07 AM
Its kinda Bella edward like


And you know it!!!


please write more of Graffiti

Pweese!!

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Into the realm of the unknown.....Gender?
What are you! MALE, FEMALE, McFLURRY!
Or the lesser known 4th gender.....ME!
:icongender-unknown:
~Gender-Unknown Sep 27, 2008, 5:35:41 AM
Sorry I dindni put that i liked it


I really do, tis rather clever

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Into the realm of the unknown.....Gender?
What are you! MALE, FEMALE, McFLURRY!
Or the lesser known 4th gender.....ME!
:iconnytram12:
=Nytram12 Sep 27, 2008, 5:38:51 AM
yep scribbling is fun =p

--
Life is just living in confusion. Its what you make of that confusion that matters

Want to get more feedback on your prose or poetry? ---> *Writers-Club
:iconkezzi-rose:
*Kezzi-Rose Sep 27, 2008, 6:24:47 AM
LOL yes, yes it is 8DD

I wiiill! I really need to plan it though ;~;

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☆ { ĸ e z z ı } THE TOXiC KiTTY™
Dinosaurs aren't e x t i n c t ; they're just shy♥
:icongender-unknown:
~Gender-Unknown Sep 27, 2008, 11:04:27 AM
thanks

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Into the realm of the unknown.....Gender?
What are you! MALE, FEMALE, McFLURRY!
Or the lesser known 4th gender.....ME!
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